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maka is angry

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meh, moar unfinished work.

i would like critiques on the proportions, please.
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hhhmmm well i'm looking at her and I'm not exactly sure whihc way she's going...her body and face are facing right like she's just standing but her hand is big so that throws it off, then you look for the smaller arm(there it is)but it's too small for the body which shows no change of angle. The feet kinda just look thrown in there, like they belong to a different person.

The color is great as usual but what keeps it from being super good are the strange angles, look at books and stuff they make good references.